Critical Investigation: first draft learner response
On your MEST4 coursework blog, complete the following tasks:
On your MEST4 coursework blog, complete the following tasks:
Type up your teacher comments from your first draft.
Write a numbered list of five things you will do or change for your second draft that will help you get there. Be specific and explain in detail.
WWW: Good textual analysis. Good link to wider context. Wide range of sources
EBI: Conclusion needs to refer back to the question. Shorter paragraphs. Include more book references.
WWW: Contains a good amount of media terminology
EBI: Try to include more media theory
WWW: Covered narrative, audience well
EBI: Add a few more quotes, media concepts
WWW: Good application of social values in relation to the text
EBI: Mention social class. Answer question. PEE paragraph to execute. Audience theory
WWW: Great textual analysis
EBI: More research and quotes
WWW: Good analysis, including theory
EBI: Add in the theory and debates to have a stronger argument towards your main question.
Write what mark/grade you are aiming for in your second draft.
B=35
-Include more book quotes
-Fix my footnotes and bibliography
-More explicit answer to the question
-Add more media debates
-More evaluative comments
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